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Friday, November 03, 2006

and the seed in her womb grew into a heathy proud plant(tree)
as it grew its independence grew its pride grew and it then looked beyond himself

looked around with contempt ,seeing creatures trying to struggle out from where they were
and then he looked whr it was standing.

(give some music of climax)

He condemned the mother(earth),how could she give rise to so many small creatures like him and him!
had she no character?!

And then it left her to stand aloneto forget what filth grew him.Some other proud creatures like it,stood upto the air.
and they stopped growing.

(thats it full stop.).

2 Comments:

Blogger RainMan said...

i know din cum out to be gud,infact am not at all satisfied with it,anyway published it dunno why.

btw the tree lived or not after that thats for u to decide,i just said it stopped growing.)

11:28 PM  
Blogger SaiK said...

the ending doesnt seem to justify the awesome begining .... pretty good though

4:33 AM  

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